Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Engagements/blah?

they wanted traditional, anything I should have done to make this picture even better? Still be traditional but with a little spice?

3 comments:

Tutor said...

I would say a few things could spice this up.
1. fill the frame. Unless you have a cool and interesting environment that lends it self to your composition, fill it.
2. Lighting. if you can use the light to differentiate your subjects from their environment or back ground, a picture can be come more dynamic. In this shot they might be only a few stops if that different. Possibly adding a post processing vignette could help it.
3. Environment, as you know, putting them some place that looks interesting or in the very least looks like it might have been hard to get to can add importance to the occasion. A common park? idk I guess it could work, maybe in this shot you could have gotten down, level with your subjects eyes, opening up whats back there instead of just grass.
4. DoF. If your back ground sucks, draw more attention to your subjects by blowing it out. Looks like you might be at a 4.5 here idk, but maybe if thats true a 2.8 if called for.

Hope this helps..

Tutor said...
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Tutor said...

These kids are also very pale from a cold hard winter. Throw an 81a photo filter over them @ 20% and see if that warms things up.

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